Critique my mix?

Hey Guys!

Constructive criticism on this mix would be much appreciated. 

This is a second and final attempt on these tracks I got from Cambridge-MT.com.  I may have squashed the mix a bit too much to glue….idk. Trying to make it punch.  Need your opinion. 

Thanks a bunch 

Sean



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