Hi Owen, it's a great mix, really dig the tight drums. I'm going to categorize the feedback into instrument sections so its a bit easier to read, please also know that I'm not giving criticism, please take it as suggestions on different ways to tackle the problem and nothing but positive. I don't like dancing around the problem so I will be blunt but I mean it in the nicest way possible. With mixing there is no right or wrong, and you're putting your own creativity into the mix to bring it to its full potential, so use your ear and go with the vibes.
Preface: I listened to this through a pair of Beyerdynamic DT 770 Pro 250 Ohm Headphones powered by a Focusrite Scarlett 8i6 3rd Gen and a pair of Polk Audio Signature S55 Speakers powered by a Yamaha A-S501 (I think, I have forgotten). The headphones are calibrated with Sonarworks Reference. The Polk's are not supposed to be flat.
The vocals are thing that I think would push the track to the next level. T...