Ok, so first - shame on me! I posted here and then completely forgot I'd put it here as well as gearslutz. I just posted my second mix off there - which I will also copy here afterward, and a user mentioned that they had replied to this mixoff here. Terrible!
Secondly - thank you so much to everyone who has had a go. I love hearing what people do with my tracks, and while they aren't the best source recordings, I'm glad people can get something sounding reasonable out of them. I learn so much from hearing what people do with this both in terms of the mix, and effects used; and it really informs how I approach my mixing.
Ok, here we go, let me reply to as many as possible.
MortenDK - I know I replied to yours on GS, but was just relistening to your mix and wanted to say again that I love it! Especially all the vocal effects. I really need to think of a way to approach this, I think it can add so much to the tracks.
S1770 - Thank you for the advice...