Ok, so I did a quick one-pass mix:
Thanks for sharing the tracks.
I have some notes, if you don't mind:
From a production perspective: There is this bar before the choruses without vocals, that leaves the listener "hanging". It needs a melodic element, from a commercial stand point at least, to lead into the chorus.
Some more guitars would help the density of the song. Some crunch sounds with sustained chords to underline the main chord changes in the chorus mixed in a little bit, for example. It doesn't have to be obvious, just to get the feeling of "more" in the chorus.
The drums of course lack some human element, but I guess you know that ;D Cymbals and especially high hats in AD have some very peculiar sound that can get harsh fast. This wasn't the first time I put a de-esser on a AD high hat. Also the high hat track is too compressed. Is this the AD master channel saturation ...