Thanks for taking a shot at it!
My first impression is that the vocals are pretty on top, of course, it's always hard to hear your own vocals out front like that, especially old ones!
The hats are pretty splashy, and hard to tame, cymbals in a small room always bleed all over everything, and are a pain. Your mix has them pretty well controlled, they're loud, but not harsh.
The buss compression seems to pump the entire track around the vocals a bit, if that makes sense. It overall feels a bit flat from a dynamic perspective, like the 'chorus' could pop a little more, maybe?
Overall, I like the guitar a lot, the bass is easy to hear, has nice even bottom, too. I'd probably layer in some samples on the drums, as they are maybe a little boxy (probably my fault from tracking!)
I think if the vocals came down a bit, and you did a little automation to bring the 'chorus' up a bit, it's quite good!