What do you guys think of my mixing?

Your kick is very prominent all the time. All hits feel like it's always the 1. If you want to keep the kick that dynamic, make it actually dynamic. Feel free to either compress with a long release, or draw some automation to make the 1 loud and 2, 3, 4 quieter. It's how 4/4 music is actually played Forte, piano, semi forte, Piano. (id honestly just compress it with a long release and turn it down a bit too)

2. main vocals are way buried. 

3. your interaction of main vocals with instrumentation but most importantly backing vocals is very reminiscent of what a performance would sound like without microphones. however in most cases our jobs as engineers, we like it or not is to create emphasis in certain elements despite how unnatural to real life that would be.

Going back to your goal of making everything audible I think you did a great job. I'm not honestly a fan of "balanced" mixes and everything clear all the time, cause the human brain can only focus on... (read more)