First (hiphop) mix on my new system, asking for feedback

Ive got this multitrack from Cambridge's "Mixing Secrets For The Small Studio" to practice mixing on my new setup. 

I was going for a darker/laidback lofi vibe, but I might have overdone it.

I welcome all feedback!

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Hello Martin B, Try making the bass more round plus, bring it more out front. Can't hear it.
The vocals have no fullness. Add some body to the vocals.
Also, do something in the mix that draws the listener ala delays on words, reverb throws on other words. Get creative.
You got this!!! Marc