First (hiphop) mix on my new system, asking for feedback

Ive got this multitrack from Cambridge's "Mixing Secrets For The Small Studio" to practice mixing on my new setup. 

I was going for a darker/laidback lofi vibe, but I might have overdone it.

I welcome all feedback!

The original:
https://previews.cambridge-mt.com/Bankroll_Full_Preview.mp3